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Shadow

I am a little shadow
my mind is all my own
Yet I find there's less of me
whenever I'm alone

I am a little shadow,
my mind is all my own
Yet I find there's many things
for which I must atone

I am a little shadow
my mind is all my own
Yet I'll stay a little shadow
when flesh gives way to bone

I am a little shadow
my mind is all my own
Yet I find there's inner light
That always brightly shone.

Author notes

Yet another poem I have NO idea the origins of. Not that proud of it, but hey, at least it rhymes.

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  • XLadyXVengeanceX
    May 29, 2008

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    wow i wish i was a little shadow
    this is one of the best poems i've
    heard in a while rock on dan

    heather


  • Era Umbra
    November 23, 2007

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    Awesomes

    I like this poem!!! The repatition keeps the concept in mind while you add in the complete opposite to show the possibilities. I like it!! -hugs-