frost covers fall leaves
reds, yellows hidden away,
green only a hope
A contest entry
- Haiku-Me.....Me Haiku by UnchartedPoet.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A delightful haiku...
A delightful haiku; a clever piece that's wonderfully phrased. --Joe
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A perfect nature Haiku... Beautiful images, well done! Congrats. on HM!
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good
simply nice
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Well done, I see why it won a trophy. Syllable count is perfect and you didn't add an additional image by giving it an unrealted title.
Love,
Amera♥
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A very nice haiku. You've brought out a beautiful picture with your equally beautiful words.
Sam
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Love the fall colors, we have them a little longer down here in Florida, as the winter does not come as harsh as it would up north. Thank you for entering my contest.
Jen
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