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counting down

Days with out you I'm alone
Counting down the days
Tell you come home

No matter the day
I'm in love

Ever day a new color
But with you in my life
Its always love

Counting down the days
Tell your in my arms again
But no matter what
I'm in love

Just waiting for you
To come back
And be my light

I dont care for the life without you
I'm in love
Just counting down the days
Tell you come home to me

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  • Gott ist tot
    November 23, 2007

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    Beautiful write showing how you feel well, 'i' needs capitalising Did you need line 6? I think it makes sense just as much without it.


    • ThedarknessIFeel
      November 24, 2007
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      you are right I dient need line 6
      just kinda going off the top og my head...
      thank you for the lovely comment...
      Darkness