This is what I have become
Although you might not see
Because you look at the surface
But there is so much more to me
What I love, you don't know much
What I hate, you know even less
Then why is it always so hard for me
To make a difference and impress
I've tried to hard, to look at you
And say there's no connection
But I always end up saying I love you
I'll always be a Perfect Imperfection.
A contest entry
- User-name Inspirations by Oracle of Darkness.
400 points, ended December 24, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does this poem make you feel?
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love the last line
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Intresting
I get the poem and all bu it's not my cup of tea if konw what I mean...Keep up the work though.
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oh i get it now
sorry lol
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Omg! You stole my title!
shame katie
shamey shamey shame
Fine then. i shall write a poemn about how much of a musik-freek i am and then i stole your name! haha!
you cannot win!
...lol ...
......jks.....
i do like the poem im just a little cheezed that you stole my name after you said perfect impefection was a stupid and b you didnt get it anyways
so yeh.
btw i just saw the comment saying sorry. wont bother deleting this comment, still a little cheezed
wait. you used it in a contest? shame
man if i enter the contest with my perfect imperfection poem they'll say i copyied yours
not good.
not good at all.
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PS: last comment was for lozza!
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Sorry in advance, for using your user-name the contest without permission, but i dont think the poem turned out that bad, dont you?
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