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Unlucky Charms

She licked spoons
that served her ego
with verbal buffets
that went for miles
around her padded cell-

Bruised flesh hung
in blood spattered
atmosphere as
paint-by-numbers,
careful not to
get out of bounds;

Scenarios ran like
after school specials
that produced her secret life
contained in cereal boxes,
sorting through colored marshmallows
and hoping to find her lucky charm-

Where green clovers would
shatter bony fists of hate
and take hope to other side
of the rainbow 

Author notes

Abuse is wrong

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  • Musimwa
    February 8, 2008
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    Very interesting. Thank u


  • Ladybug
    November 27, 2007

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    I loved the ending, this an impressive write about a wrong that goes on day by day and we all turn our head to the jail system that allows it to be tolerated.

    good write Sis

    Tamara


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    how true - abuse is wrong, no matter what kind, no one should have to endure any kind, especially children. Nice bronze winner you have penned here. Congrats.


  • Tangled Angle
    November 24, 2007
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    Excellent.