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Dark Soul

The darkness in my soul.
My heart is no longer whole.
The inside pain hurts more then the outside,
it has nothing to do but hide.

But when the razor comes out, so does relief.
I don't care what you think, I have my own beliefs.
I need to rid of my pain, and this is how.
Don't try to fill me with your 'Holier then thou.'

Pure emotion. Always to much.

To an okay world I tired to clutch,

but there is no such thing,

because gone away are my wings.

 

After thinking all that through,

I begin a cut brand new.

As blood pours from my wrist,

I begin to wish.

 

Wish for it all to go away,

for happiness to come and stay.

But that will never happen.

Always, will I be saddened.

 

I will not complain,

about this pain.

With it I will just live on,

until I or it is finally gone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I know I said I wouldnt post anymore but emotionalysecretive wanted me to enter so i did. lol i love her to death so yeah...

OPTION NUMBER 6
in your comment please tell me if it fits! lol

"6)Final Option. this one is a little darker. I am currently extremely focused on the topic of self-mutilation, or cutting. But this one is specific.
-I don't want "I hate him/her/them, so now I'm gonna go cut myself" I feel that is fake, and don't want it.
-It can be from experience of from an outsider's viewpoint, but no bashing please.
-I want this one raw. pure emotion."

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    March 5, 2008

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    This is a great dark poem. So sad! cutting is always a scary thing. I couldn't even begin to understand what they are going through and how they cut their pain away. It's so intense! Great write!


  • Horses Wild Spirit
    November 28, 2007
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    WOW

    Amazing poem!!! The emotion seeped through and I just want to say one thing!! Don't do it lol!!! I got over it so can u! But again very nice poem I loved the message it left and god sakes this better win!!! If it don't I am gonna beat emm-z up for not letting u win. Well that is unless I win lol, i havn't even entered dont worry!! GREAT


    • SweetLeaf
      January 7, 2008
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      sorry it took so long to reply.
      Thanks for your support!
      I promise I won't. Most of my poems are just old emotion coming out at the oddest of times. Like that one to Jesse. Which I will not give.

      -fangirl

  • SweetLeaf
    November 27, 2007
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    i wonder why no body commented....
    so sad.