See this royalty; this rose -
Queen amongst Queens:
this contradiction of emotions
tenderness and passion twirling
around a stem of yearning
and of dreams
See this romance; this rose -
Poem amongst Poems:
this everlasting love born
amidst the crucifying thorn
listen to her fragrant flute
to the rhythm of her mood
See this promise; this rose -
Invitation amongst Invitations:
this secretive bond of souls
which unfolds without motion
which dwells upon the spell
of pure imagination
See this royalty; this rose -
enter into the Kingdom
of her heart
myra
Author notes
Written January 27th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- Roses by l-u-b-y-l-o-o.
450 points, ended July 10, 2004, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Makes me think of Mary ^^ great write
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absolutely beautiful poem about the true meaning of roses. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with each of us. Melody
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Love its tone..
Edited on Jul 04, 5:38 p.m. because ''. -
wow this is just utterly beautiful! incredible write!
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Wouldn't you know it. The first contest I enter I have to compete against something as beautiful as this. Good luck Myra.
Sincerely,
Leo Long -
Great!
This is great! I like the style of your writing. It's worth winning!
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Brilliant, truly amazing...
I loved every word! The last stanza was perfect; roses are always associated with love, but very rarely are the poems surrounding them so well executed. I wish you luck in this contest... -
excellent
Wonderful write Myra, this was amazing and creative beautiful your lines See this royalty; this rose -
enter into the Kingdom of her heart is lovely such a romantic and beautiful write on love for that special someone...excellent...... But also unity so them can bloom as one...:O)Peace and love,Sherry -
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awesomness(i swear I is not as stup[id as i seem.... really...... i do......) -
Thanks bb ... I appreciate your visit.
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am i imagining the shape of a rosebud in the form? sure looks like one to me.....if not, what a happy accident...if so, how very clever and effective! either way....BRAVA!!!
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Thank you, Dreamer! I love your name ...
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Exactly what a rose truly is. There is no sham writng impromptu
that's how most of my poems are (can you tell) I think it is amazing how well you expressed all the emotions that come up with the gift of a rose........oooooo idea.......g2g .......eee
eeeeeee poem...hehe
No but really thank you so much for sharing this loveingly written piece it is going in my favorites.
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Oh your RH, we are flattered!
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like a king i look and respond, with beauty and love, i am devoured by your words :o)
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Thanks all! I am convinced that the Ultimate Woman is symbolized by a rose ... which ever variation or cultivar, does not matter!
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Definitely a great write! It took alot of thought I am sure! I enjoyed it and will be adding it to my faves! :)
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Oh how beautiful. It's going to go into my favs. Wish my other lost half could read this. We both love roses. He wrote one about the rose too. He's Freewriter. Ty for the wonderful comment and taking the time to stop by my work. It means alot.
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I love to combine emotion and intellect ...thanks Quabben!
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Beautiful poem M, strong focus and a good choice of words.
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Thank you, Heinzs, for a neat comment and for your welcome visit.
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Lovely writing! Nice format and style. Very descriptive around the one cohesive unit, the 'rose'.
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