music pulsing
through his veins,
seeking an escape,
no sense of anything
while he destroys
the ones he loves,
returning everything
just stay calm
and listen to the Xephon song
maybe the dandelion girl
can save this Olin
after all, she remains his ixtli
can she help him now?
no longer human,
the fate he tried to escape
beautiful and terrible,
white seraphic,
tremendous chords,
shaking the ground
white or black
dear Ayato, save them
Author notes
This poem was inspired by RahXephon. RahXephon is a beautiful anime series that is very much based around music. It's about forgiving and love. The animation is beautiful. If you have a chance to watch it, I recommend you do.
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Comments
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this series is one of my favorite anime and manga. Makoto Isshiki is my favorite character from the anime...even though he may be arrogant, he still has a soft side that rarely shows.
i actually feel kind of sorry for ayato sometimes!! -
In this line:
"can see help him now?"
Don't you mean "she" instead of "see" ?
Also, I would start each sentence with capital.
Anyway, a very well penned piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job!
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