I spend hours watching the corner.
Because that's your corner, Daddy.
And I'm not quite sure-
Whether I watch in fear or-
What are those feelings.
But a child I am.
No... Child implies innocence
A small being then.
Not even human
(Just Daddy's Little Slut)
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Wow
Very very touching
It hits home.
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Beautifully writen a strong powerful write keep up the amazeing work hun
*~*bee*~~
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That was so sad and heart wrenching, well done.
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Oh how I wish I could just swoop down and grab your alienated child, tell her she's OK, that she's done not wrong. My heart skipped a beat on this piece, if only because I felt like shit, reading it, like I could do nothing as the damage has set.
In the ten lines of text you presented, I think I've found more sadness in myself than I have in anything in a long time.
I also like your last little line... it brought the dehumanization your character has been through, all to its climax.
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