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Undefended







humiliated naked body
mangled my belly
stole innocence  
merciless violator
hide in weak disease
used as a rag
smashing gradually
child's dream
look in eyes
like a plaything
ripened, fills of nausea
supported by vengeance
not any more
undefended girl
condemned
in probation
day by day
nightmare
shadow
your label
dirtiness of pedophilia.




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Prompt: Pedophilia

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  • Zixaphir
    November 23, 2007

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    Ouch...
    Your imagery here was... well, not beautiful, but capturing. I see bruises, I see humiliation, I FEEL guilty to have not been able to stop the pain from happening. Nice write, very nice write.