I have a disturbing need
that has gotten to my head and pierced my heart.
I want you to believe in me, like I believe in you.
I want you to love me unconditionally,like I love you.
I want you to need me, just like I need you.
But it seems am not good enough for you
Am not worthy of your belief
Am not much to be loved
And am too needy to be needed
A look at the mirror
I see what you love
To touch these full breasts that stare back at me
To kiss my whole body and lick my woman with a passion
And to madly fuck me till am sore
It excites me when you do that
And you always say you have not had better
But you scare me when you are done.
Because I lose you.
And I know I will not have you with me,
Till your animal needs check in again
And I will be worthy of much more.
I look at the mirror,
And sometimes I wish I did not have all these
Because you will never see past my body
And I so badly want you to touch me where it aches most
I want you to whisper sweet words to me
And to remain true to me
I want you to fill the emptiness within
And to hold my hand when am lonely
It hurts that you did not appreciate me
But it hurt most that you lied about loving me
Knowing how so badly I wanted that from you
That I gave up all:
My dignity
My morals
My pride
Even my self esteem
Then I lost you
You lied
And then you said I would be fine.
I do not know where to start
But you were right.
I will be fine.
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Broken love
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My Ap Daughter
look to the inside to see the real measurement of your beauty. Reserving the outside shell for only one who can see the internal beauty of you as well.
Your words are aptly penned with much emotion, that speak of blunt honesty on a subject many can relate to, unfortunately.
Blessings to you,
PureCountry
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Great write. It was strong.
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Quite a few grammatical errors but the overall write is both passionate and personal and I really like that.
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reminds me of an ex of mine... except the perky breasts... that line was just wrong... and so are mine... but having half a million kids will do that to ya lol. he used to come over at 4am after the pubs closed if he didnt pick up that night. i lost his phone number and i have a new one... fate perhaps? you deserve better than to b loved for your body... but thats the way most men think. thats why i dress ugly as i possibly can when i go out for a drink. blessed be and remember pride, without that theres no 'you' inside.
hugs,
georgie,
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I really like the background you useed, IT goes great with the poem. I really like the message and the structure as well=) great poem I loved it
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I read this, and had memories flood through me of when this happened to me. So I know what this feels like. Having someone not see you for who you are is almost shameful in a way, because I know from my personal experience, I fell too hard, I opened myself up too fast, and in the end, if I had kept my guard up,(i.e. waited for intimacy) he couldn't have hurt me the way that he did. I don't know if this is what happened to you, but I want you to know, I promise it does get better. The poem itself was so beautiful. Keep up the good work, and stay strong girlie. You'll be fine. (((hugs))))
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Nicely writen, I myself am going through this exact story... as far as the poem it self I see it as wonderfully done with only a couple of miss placed words. Such as "this perky breasts" I belive it was ment to be These and Im not entirley sure but i think that "lick my woman with a passion" was supposed to be Womanhood. But other then that I dont recall seeing anything wrong with the work at all.
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Loved It
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People will say all kinds of shit to get laid. You sound like a very beautiful person who has been objectified. It happens. Too bad people are mostly incapable of being honest about their intentions. Often, because if they were, they wouldn't get what they wanted. Some of the most beautiful people are corrupt. Someone who makes you happy is what you want. He or she is out there. Or maybe you can hook up with some fuck buddies and live alone...until that person comes along. Just say, "I'm going to fuck this one...because I want to."
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This is a very touching and emotional poem. *cries like never before* I'm sorry that you feel like this. I wished there was something I could do to make you feel better. I hurt for the things that you put in this poem. You did a very excellent job. If this poem is from your experience I am so sorry. *cries even harder* It's a sad thing to go through wanting someone who doesn't want you to want and need you as you need them. This poem really spoke to my heart. If you ever want someone to talk too, IM me or find some way to talk with me and I'll help with whatever it is I can. God bless you my fellow poet friend. God guide you on your journey to find someone who loves you for who you are and not what you can do. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. Again, I am so sorry if you actually went through this. That thought really breaks my heart into a million pieces. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of poetry with me.
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