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Memories

Christmas eve
you sat there watching me
doing my version of a long
slow tease.
groaning a laugh in to my mouth as you picked me up carried me to bed.
Those little white panties with the tiny lights were the sexiest things you said and you laughed at my blushing as you always did
Your hands so strong and warm.
God I loved your hands the very strength of your body.
The differences of us me so soft and you so strong.
We made love all night in to Christmas morning under that quilt your grandmother made us.
All we had that year to give was each other.
Snowed in at sugar mountain building condos on the top in the dead of winter.
All those protesters out by the creek calling for our blood ruining the sky line. News reporters TV crews. You pushed me behind you and stared them down.
Trying to get our company off the ground.
That winter before it got so cold and so bad was magic to us.
Only the good die young.
Wrapped up in your arms I was so loved.
We had pumpkin pie from a service station for breakfast.
The most beautiful Christmas ever.
I have that memory.








 
























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  • Sagerider gold member
    January 27

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    Tlhis is great

    Some of the worst times can be the best. Dickens said it best, "It was the best of times, I was the worst of times."


  • arafura
    January 12

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    pumpkin pie!

    Pumpkin pie is good... being loved is better! this is very good my friend! I can tell it is a special memory!

  • I won't yell at you... first of all this was very touching.. and I loved the background... however by a personal experience of your own... I meant ... stripper related!

    • Rheea gold member
      January 7
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      hey girl I stripped my heart out that night for him to the music in my head...the long slow tease see above.I had panties with tiny lights on them... it was something lol..he thought so anyway=)

  • malmadre gold member
    January 7
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    Great imagery, snowed in with a lover, what a memory to have!

  • Nighttime angel
    January 1
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    this is a beautiful poem that you have penned. this is a wonderful & beautiful memory that you have. thank you for sharing it with me. whether you believe me or not, sister pot you have a wonderful talent for writing.

    I love reading your poems, they remind me of whats important in life. I also get to share in your memories and your life.

    kat


  • Brandoninloveandlies
    November 26, 2007
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    Awsome

    this a very good poem i loved the imagery


  • Swan song gold member
    November 24, 2007
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    Wow now I am reashing for my bloo dpressure medication well done


  • PureRomance
    November 23, 2007
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    This is a very beautiful and image-riched poem. I loved it. This was a very beautiful memory you have. God bless you and thank you for sharing it with me and other members of AP. I wish you all the luck in the contest, and I hope you had a very wonderful Thanksgiving day. Keep up the excellent work.
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