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[ Is Friendship never ending? ]

Is Friendship never ending?
A friend is a friend forever... right?
Or does it end with that big fight.

If you remember them forever
then you meet again and never
thought you'd have this friend
forever

This friend was to the best
Then you forgot all the rest
as years go by remember all
lest

all you dreamt and all you dream
all will break at the seams.
Upon meeting, you were a
team.

So do these promises ever cease
or do they stay in you memories?
Teach me the answer to this
life long riddle and you will
have a friend forever more.

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  • Anna Emkah
    November 23, 2007

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    I think true friendships never really end. I have friends from kindergarten, which I hadn't seen in quite some time, but when we met it was as if we had talked yesterday for the last time. Real friends are living in your heart. They can even have a fight, but it does not have to mean the end of the friendship. At least, that's my opinion. I hope I have given you the answer you wanted to hear. lol.

    In line 8, do you mean: 'This friend was 'though' the best'? I do like this poem. Very well done.
    Anna.