I loved you first
ink spilled my heart
upon these pages.
I loved you first
scared to speak passion
shy trembling voice
Ironically, i said,
Promise you wouldn't fall...
and i collapsed into soul
night dreaming
your tender hand
wrapped through my hair
Does dreams become real
I felt your caress
seen flecks love in your eyes
You encased my wounded heart
Treasuring it
healing it with your soft words
Thank you beloved
For tasting my salty tears
now I ask...
Promise you will fall with me forever
A contest entry
- Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Such a beautiful softness in this piece....I think we all want the same thing in this world to love and be loved.... beautiful sweetie
Karen
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this is very emotional for you to write this.
I felt it when I read it. the pem flow the ink into word of love and then to promise of love forever. The ink keep flowing as time come and go... Good luck my daughter.
I love you
Mother
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Wow. Beautiful. I enjoyed reading it, the first few lines made me fear it would be another cliched love poem but I liked it's originality. -paint
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awwwwwwwww your soft words of love caress the heart. nicely done. success in the contest.
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Jules
Thank you my dearest person in my life for this HM! I am thankful for the chance to express myself as i would..lol
I am honored!
Thank you, again Jules,
Love
~Lisa~
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my pleasure.
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