Her silhouette against the moonlight,
backdrop to accent beauty so rare.
Presence commanding a second look,
skin smooth as silk beyond compare.
Green eyes bedazzle and lure you in,
accentuating her come hither smile.
Cleavage stirs your imagination,
beware those thoughts that beguile.
Long tresses covering bare shoulders,
eyes watching her walk as she sashays.
Pleasure watching hourglass figure,
passing you by her derriere sways.
This graceful divine angelic like creature,
hypnotic splendor as gentle winds blow.
Possess the beauty of a goddess,
loveliness of high cheek bones aglow.
In a list
A contest entry
- Elegant Sway by quantumsurveyor.
475 points, ended November 30, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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An elegant and sympathetic poem that holds passion and innocence as one; however the use of derriere pulls the reader up and disturbs the otherwise fine writing.
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G'Day Beautiful Sandy
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Oh my goodness what a beautiful write ! Such tranquility and romance
Breath-taking and stunning!
Best of luck to you in the contest
Stay safe
Love to you
~AJ
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Your job of capture was a great one
Your little goddest was a pleasant to the eyes view. Good job...mac
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Thank you again dear friend for the nice comment. Bless you. Sandy
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I loved the mental image, simply stunning. I'm sorry there's really no other words I can find...
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving a nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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very nice description.
best of luck in the contest, ey. -
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving a nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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Intriguing
I like how you painted a word picture here. I truly believe that any ( and every) female body has a beauty to it. Sometimes we need to seek it out . But first you must find her soul and in this instance I saw the innocent nature of this maiden in the poem. Then again I could be projecting here ,but what the hey!, a good poem should allow for some ' projecting ' from a reader.
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Love the picture use.The wording goes with the picture to a tee.I really like your descritive use of writing.You help bring out the beauty in her and show others just how beautiful that she is.I quickly responded to your sincerity in what you percieved.Thanks for the great piece of writing.Hope you win.
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