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Unforgiven Angel

I know the truth,
That you hate me for what I've done,
But yet I tell you,
About the other person,
Making it so that,
You will never forgive me

The love that we had shared,
Is something that is hard to get over,
So I will just sit here,
My back to the wall,
Blackness surrounding me,
With everything wrong,
As you continue to hate,
Your unforgiven angel

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I hope this kinda like what you wanted.

PS: I would never cheat on some one I loved. I havn't yet and I don't plan on ever doing it.

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  • love tank x
    November 27, 2007
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    Hey this is really deep; it's awesome. Great job and good luck with the contest as well :] <3