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The End Of Misery (Triolet)

At last I have broken free
Unshackled the chains that bind
No longer ruled by thee
At last I have broken free
Goodbye forever my misery
Knowing that happiness I'll find
At last I have broken free
Unshackled the chains that bind.

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  • Anna Emkah
    November 23, 2007

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    Very nice! Good to hear that you have broken free from misery and found happiness. You have created a good emotion with only a few lines. Very well done.
    Anna.