I want a place to call my own
A home, a heart, a place to grow
Somewhere where my heart won't bleed
Where love is abundant
Where my dreams will be seen
Somewhere where I can finally just breathe
Just forget about the world problems
Just forget about the pain
The pressure and the fame
Sometimes you have to take two steps backwards
And finally find your way back home
Where you are surrounded by love ones
By family and by friends
Because they say home is where the heart is
So I guess I've finally found my way back home
In the hearts of my love ones
A place to call my own
Author notes
wrote this poem for thanksgiving...read it in wrote of my family before we ate
it can be about family or love
A contest entry
- Heart Wrenching Feeling by Indeed.
300 points, ended December 7, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hey... The only way you can find a Place you can call your own. is by developing it in the Depths of your mind. When you Help others disover your Dream, you know you have a dream for yourself.. Really, you've found the right contest to join... because i'll help you out.
Great Poem..
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thank you..and I understand what you are saying to some degree...its the same thing I was trying to say
I have learned that when you finally can accept yourself for who you are...and truely find love for oneself...you have found your home or place to call you own
Then you can finally have the strength to love other people...family and friends!
And yes I'm very glad I enter this contest...It was a very open ended contest...but one you had to really put some thought and feeling into it....plus any advice would be great too!
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From reading this poem...I now wanna join your family! PLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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hahahaha
thanks for reading!!!
you cab join if you want!!!
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You possess maturity beyond your years. Home is a place where we can feel safe, loved and appreciated. To say home is where the heart is...is also what I believe. Good write.
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thanks a lot!
I truely believe home is where the heart is...if their is no love..it can't truely be a home...just a house
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