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Hoping, Dreaming

Wishful thinking
Taking thoughts.

Wanting things that
You have naught.

Hoping,
Dreaming,

Wishing
You could sing.

Wanting to sing a song
'Bout sleeping in a sailor's cot.

Oceans waters
Only for daughters,

Only for the feminine
Sailor.

Stuck behind bars
Trickin' the jailor.

Hoping,
Dreaming,

Wishing
You had three
Wishes.

Author notes

This is kind of a rhyming song poem thing. I chose 'wishful'. I noticed you didin't have that on the list... Lots of people wish
Good luck with the contest!

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  • pop123
    December 23, 2007
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    gr8 poem
    And good luck in the contest!

  • RIP-sanity
    November 25, 2007

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    For an 11 year old kid you are very very talented, I'm sure your poetry will be quite amazing in a couple of years, keep writing