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baby wrapped in baby blue

a baby is born,
46 chromosomes
stolen from
two miserable earthlings,

their greatest defeat
against life,
this pure, innocent
(doomed)
    infant.

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  • chucksbruisedego
    November 21
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    too true

    Heeey, its been awhile. Thought I'd get on and check out some of your more recent poems. I always liked your style and your themes. This paints a nice, dark image of bringing innocent life into such a corrupt world