Her beauty is unmatched by any other flower,
she stand so straight and tall, proud like a tower.
She is soft and smooth, yet can prick you sometimes too,
the perfect symbol of humanity: a blend of love, hurt, and truth.
Whether alone or in a crowd,
her beauty never fades;
Though sometimes even the fairest in the land
feel as if they can easily be replaced.
Her humility is astounding,
and her understanding can't be surpassed.
Even in the darkest of hours,
she shines like a beacon on the cliffs.
How she yearns to be like other flowers,
and know what companionship is.
Yet, I guess she wasn't meant to be held close,
wasn't meant to blend in.
She stand tall and proud,
sacrificing her happiness for that of all others.
She guards all those around,
watching yet knowing she can never touch.
Author notes
I don't think an explanation is needed.This has got to e the worst night of my life.I just...I had to let my emotions out somehow, even if it was in something that had no relation at all.
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Wow....I'm speachless this is one of the best poems I've read all day....such a beatiful write...so talented...I can understand where you coming from so what...She guards all those around,
watching yet knowing she can never touch....that's how I feel with my friends.....I feel like the light house the becon that pulls them home when they get lost....and I love to help them dearly...but at times I wish I could risk getting lost...wish I could feel what they feel...
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A wonderful way to let your emotions flow freely
Thank you for sharing this, hon!
All the best to you! -
i really like this and it was a good way to let your emotions out
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