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Sweety

My angel
My love
my awesome little girl
To me you run,
when things are scary
like the monsters
that are under your bed
you cling to me
and I feel ever so complete.

I stoke your still soft hair
with my now coarse hand
a hand that has been bruised
by life's tarry ways
never shall you have to endure
the life I lived
never will your sweet smile
be permanently wiped from your face

This is a mother's promise
to her angelic daughter
I will always be there
I will always love you
no matter how hard I find it
you can always trust
that no matter what
I LOVE YOU

Author notes

one day when Sha can read... I hope she finds this....
Written October 23rd, 2003

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  • barefoot contessa silver member
    November 4, 2003
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    this was so beautiful. wipes away her tears I hope that Sha will one day read this and be so full of her mother love for her. i quite enjoy this.
    -tainted princess

  • SirGir
    October 23, 2003
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    KEWLNESS!!!!!!!!

    AWWWW< this is so kool, it brought tears to my eyes. I hope that Sha will one day know of how much love her mom has for her.... Great write, hope to see more soon

    P.S.... I guess now i have to write sumtin too, hehe