My love is fun like a roller coaster,
make you laugh and scream with joy.
My love is free like the four seasons,
you may feel angry, cold,
crying or jealous.
My love is simple but strong enough
to travel with you
to the other side of the world.
My love has no secret, blunt and
silly sometimes.
But I would rather die
if my love did not make you
comfortable in everything you do.
Because my love is unconditional
and I love you
just the way you are...!
A contest entry
- Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was sucha soft caring poem that caressed the heart strings.
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Awsome
I got the chills,,It touched my heart, It souds like your talking about my man. This is a perfect poem, I loved it. My love is simple but strong, Hes funny and makes me laugh. The honesty is awsome. It was a pleasure to read your work.
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WOW!
If only there were more people in the world who felt the way you do, this world would be a MUCH funner place to live, that's for sure. I have been looking for this kind of love all my life; i hope others are lucky enough to find it.
Peace
Erik -
wow! hun this was fantastic! I wished i had read it earlier,This is love alright any man would be lucky to have you!
So full of excitment!
Congrats on your silver sweety,
Love
~Lisa~
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Thank you Jules and Lisa for such a sweet comments and silver
we need to keep everything simple & fun to have a healthy life...
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mmm sweet sentiments are these my friend I dare say quite sweet indeed
My love is simple but strong enough
to travel with you
to the other side of the world.
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awww...wow...*smile*
thst is cute. i really like it!
very good write! -
such sweet flowing words of caring. success in the contest.
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unconditional...
Very good indeed my friend! I really like this work and you have structured it very well. One of your best poems! Good luck in the contest!
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