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Internet love

wondering wandering
searching for a miracle
I crossed oceans
chased rainbows
confided with angels
I travelled to the future
to a time when all of humanity was captured in a box
only then
in that box
did I find you


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this was prompted by Lady Yvette

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  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    Oh my,I am so honoured that this write was prompted by me,what a wonderful surprize to find this today.The poem is short,sweet and complete.It has a simplicity yet is not simple.Liked the alliteration within wandering wondering also the allusiion to all of mankind captured in a box,indeed the internet is set within a square yet what we choose to seek usually mirrors ourselves and within that we may become free from being cornered or having constraints and fly free within the majesty of imagination.Liked too the happy ending.Bravo and thankyou dear poet.