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mm. this moment. right now. [aka untitled & unfinished]







spinning and swirling
within a smoky haze of
nostalgia,

she danced
to the rhythm in her
veins; inside her smile;
between her toes-

and found herself
all alone


but happy…




[maybe for the first time.]



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*sigh*

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  • vertigo beat
    November 23, 2007

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    -but /happy…/
    dunno if i like those slashes.

    this reminds of the silly little girl who spun around like crazy for no reason; that used to be me. sometimes i still get that surge and dizzy the fucking crap out of myself when no one's looking.


  • Dancing Marionette
    November 22, 2007

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    i understand this feeling so wellll. you described it so much more amazing than i ever could babyy.