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Dusty Corners of My Heart

You are everywhere
In my coffee cup
In the mirror staring back at me
The brush of a hand against my back
I hear your voice && the sweet sound of your laugh
I can still feel the warmth of your last hug
The taste of your last kiss
Baby, Why do you have to be
The last thing I see before I close my eyes
These warm tears that stain my bed sheet
Are the memories of you && me
Bleeding from the dusty corners of my heart

Now she’s in the picture
&& I’m shoved into the corner













Doll-face, What ever happened to you && me??

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  • rockchick247
    December 5, 2007
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    i enjoyed this poem a lot, and i like the was you use shape in all of your writes. great! x


  • WonderingForever
    November 22, 2007

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    This is really good. You don't even really have to edit it. Might want to put a background, but otherwise, I like it.
    Great job..and keep up the good work!