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Aging Gracefully

Life is a circus
pure and simple; utter truth
fulfilled with laughter

In the eyes of a child,
a vision of humorous wonderment;
"One, two, three.... too many to count,
can't resist counting your white hairs, Mom!
OOOH, Can I call you Gramma? haha" "NO!!!"

No empathy or silent remarks,
aches and pangs of creaky bones
Snap, crackle, and pops...
Arthritis stiffening joints, tighter than a hard-on,
feeling like a decrepit old fool.

Age is but a wee number
in the minuscule time-line of life.
Gracefully aging as beauty reigns
in mirrored stellar compassions
Like a new star exploding in the galaxy abounding
destiny grows in poetic strengths

Living a magical journey:
of wrinkles to brace
breasts needing mighty uplifted support
incontinent-al depend-ance
mental memory landslide;
 

No matter our aging deficiencies of life
we're virtuous in our prime


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  • Grey Mouser
    December 2, 2007

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    ROFL, very humorous write.
    Love this stanza for it rings so true...
    "Living a magical journey:
    of wrinkles to brace
    breasts needing mighty uplifted support
    incontinent-al depend-ance
    mental memory landslide;"
    Very well done and all my best to you in the contest.

    Mouser