it started out,
as innocent friendship.
play fighting,
talking.
then we got closer,
cozier.
we started to,
touch.
inncoent at first,
in both our eyes.
then,
feeling's developed,
on my behalf.
i have tried to tell you,
how i feel.
i dropped suttle clues,
i have even told you.
you spat it in my face,
you pushed me away.
why dont you love me,
like i love you?
A contest entry
- Random Contest by Eire Go Brach.
565 points, ended December 5, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Whatcha got now? by Southern Darling.
700 points, ended January 1, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wat u think?
Comments
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Trite, if heartfelt. Little to no emotion evident. And grammar
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oh honey this is just what I was looking for with this option. It's so beautiful in such a way that I can't ever describe.
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