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The Nights – Unbearable

Sleep is so impossible,
When thoughts of you they crawl-
Creeping up each side of my bed-
Slithering up each side of my wall.

Such a nightmare within itself,
But never do dare to seal
These eyes that bare my desire,
Whilst living a nightmare- that feels so real.
For everything we once had
And everything we once shared,
Memorized inside, perfectly,
Never able to escape my head.
It’s those memories that haunt me-
Every night- never the day.
For the days have distractions,
As nights they feed on prey.

Tears rise each nightfall
As I struggle for sanity,
Craving to let go of our ‘once had’
And awaken from reality-

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She's nothing you'll ever know, succumbing to perfection, lost in translation

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  • over the rainbow--x
    January 5, 2008

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    I really liked this,
    especially the final stanza:
    'Tears rise each nightfall
    As I struggle for sanity,
    Craving to let go of our ‘once had’
    And awaken from reality-'

    Thats just amazing [=

    good luck in my contest [=

  • Omegalulz
    November 22, 2007

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    One of the best work I have ever read. This touched me deep. You are one fine writer. I'll have to see some more of your work.

    Omega