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Long Playing Album










The mellow sound
of vintage jazz
melted away
the wax
from my blocked ears















A contest entry

Please be honest but be a teacher not a critic! Thanks!

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  • Mallig gold member
    December 16, 2007

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    Wonderful, I really liked this. So many ways our ears can become blocked, but music can set us free. Excellent!


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 28, 2007
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    i like this, i have felt this... Coltrane, Bird, tom Jobim, Miles... wonderful...PK


  • poetryality silver member
    November 23, 2007

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    Ha! This is clever. There are many ways this can be interpreted. I love Jazz, it does soothe the soul. Excellent! I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee