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tangled in sky

 

 

 

 

  

This hour of sky tangles
blue grass with hair,
basket-weaving cocoons
for the blind
and impatiently lost.
 
Everyone with an open
regard for nature,
both kinds, that which
surrounds,
and that which inhabits skin.
 
Laid back counting clouds
with the breeze, it is easy
to dream a capacity for flight
or at least ponder falling
with upward momentum.
 
We are grateful for the gravity
of honest words.
 
They lack doubt, steadfastly
holding everything together.
 
Maybe even us.
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

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  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    of honest words.

    They lack doubt, steadfastly
    holding everything together.

    Maybe even us.

    You see it.... in the eyes of children... the eyes of those who aren't tainted by the cynicism of life..
    and it's not so much truth as philosophy would like to define it, it's the communion of common outside of religious restraint.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 22, 2007
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    Oh a deep and soulful write...I was there with you.

  • Pamela A Lamppa gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    Excellent. There is much to be said about honesty and truth. This is an excellent piece. Your images are strong and pertinent. Oh I did just love this write. Well done. ~Pamela


  • Rowan gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    There's nothing like someone who understands, and who we feel we can say anything too...this is again, stunning work.


  • graphite
    November 22, 2007

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    is this my gift? i love it digest my "honest words" and dream


    you're great, i know you know that!

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