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Snow Blossoms

The water stirs like memories

remembered only in the night's

gloom, under the glow

of a midwinter moon,

that casts its ghostly brilliance

on waters stained with the fire

of all the bleeding stars.

 

The elements weep.

Opium dreams etched

on the faces of fallen angels,

markers of riverside graves.

 

Ghosts of haunted dreams

sit on the worn steps

of all the fallen parliaments.

Failed governments.

 

Dirges of eternal keening

sung to evergreen blossoms,

sprung from riverbed soil,

loamy and soft under feet.

 

Hands sweep over castle ruins

turning broken stone into dust.

How easily things are forgotten.

 

Rotten apricot blossoms

are plucked from trees.

Fingers dull from frostbite.

 

The Iron Gate opens

to cold winter waters

that sweep past frozen limbs,

bodies sent to the afterlife.

Danube calls, the river's lure.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Diatribes
    December 9, 2007
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    No idea what it's about, but it surely sounds prettty.


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 6, 2007

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    nature is found within
    the beauty
    as we see it for the first time
    allowing us
    experience her within
    those echoes of time.
    i did enjoy this!
    Keep pennong one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Room without doors silver member
    December 6, 2007

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    Outstanding

    I liked how you created a compelling poem with each stanza drawing a different reaction. You really know how to build a poem and create atmosphere. Ithought the imagery was brilliant, dynamic and original. A fine poem.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 2, 2007
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    Wonderfully done. ~Pamela


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 30, 2007

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    Oh MY!

    "Dirges of eternal keening
    sung to evergreen blossoms,
    sprung from riverbed soil,
    loamy and soft under feet."

    There is such strength in this stanza and it breathes the essence of this prompt. Such a beautiful poem here.

    I had a question though on S6 L1 - did you mean "caste" as in social class or something else? It has me a bit curious.

    Please don't respond to this message, but do take a peek. We will be reading all pieces again before the final judging.

    Truly a wonderful entry in this contest. I am very moved by this piece. Well done poet. ~Pamela

  • Heartless Angel
    November 26, 2007

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    ANOTHER AMAZING ADDITION! Another winner.

    Sincerely,
    Lillian Madeline

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