Forgiven
Today I hit my head so hard it finally knocked some sense into me
I can’t blame you or anyone else for just wanting to be free
It seems like it’s taken me so long to realise… to see
I’ve been so stupid therefore I bend my knee
And just this once I will ask thee
Please… forgive… me
my most recent one i felt like posting eh... more bad ryhming haha
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Lol the rhyming was good mate ^^
Keep it up, loving the imagery too
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Nah the ryming was good who said rmying had to sound good as long as it rymes its fine with me and i liked the plain honesty in those along with every toher of your poems u write talentedly(i know tahts not a word but its my wordXD)
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very good
This poem has good originality. A refreshing poem that deals with the reality of life and love rationally and with blunt force, forgoing the dreams and promises of youth. I enjoyed reading this poem, it rings true and real.
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