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No clue…

No clue…

Im trying not to think of you this time…
If anything proves im failing it’s this rhyme
I wonder why I was never good enough for you
There is a lot wrong with me but I honestly have no clue
If you never felt that way about me then why…
Would you say so…? I think I want to cry…
Since that day I never thought I deserved to ever shed tears
Even now I doubt but this day I cannot hold them back it sears
As the tears run down my cheek they burn my skin it feels so hot
The man I wish I were anyone you could love but no im not
And I don’t think I ever will be and still I cannot understand
But that is my problem I just wanted to tell you before I go…
You hurt me so badly and you never even seemed to know     

my most recent one i felt like posting eh... more bad ryhming haha

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  • SilverMoonFeathers
    November 22, 2007
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    oh and applause almost forgot

  • SilverMoonFeathers
    November 22, 2007

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    hmmmm...what to say...ah yes...everyone's been hurt one way or another and you are not alone not that im saying you said that just fyi although you probably already know(bad habit of repeating thingsXD)...anyways i've been hurt too just don't show it much to epople because it really doesn't help because i don't have anybody and it kinda sucsk cuz everything i feel is bottled up hidden inside so deep i wear a mask so no one can see....and your poem is really great and your rymings not bad because i don't hate it and if you ever need to talk just know that I'm here always ready for anyone to lend them a ear