To see your hand in mine is amazing
Because you are so small
And you leave your little fingerprints
On furniture and walls
But everyday you're growing
And soon will be so tall
That all these little fingerprints
Will be difficult to recall
But I know that your hand will always be there
Even when I'm old, to catch me when I fall
You were an angel sent to me from God
And are precious gift to all
Your fingerprints are forever on my heart!
Author notes
This is a sonnet..i think...if not u may DQ..but this is what went through my mind when i was preg just 2 months ago with my son.
Just a poem for my son..Jaiden Ray Matteson Head!
A contest entry
- Babies and Parents by Billythekid.
1600 points, ended March 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice?
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Isnt it amazing how when a baby makes spills and fingerprints its a magic moment on the heart? Makes one wonder why its so bad when we get older! Seriously though very nice tribute to your baby boy! You have a big heart and your son is going to grow up to be such a better person since he had you to watch over him! You are a great mom and a great person too! Dont let that slip your mind!
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This is awesome.I don't however think it is a sonnet, but that does not really matter here. The emotions you feel are tangible and I know the feelings you have conveyed very well. Thank you for entering and congrats on your son Jaiden. I have a friend and her sons' name is Jaiden as well
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How lucky this child is to have a mother like you!! This is so sweet and heartfelt and full of love. A fitting tribute to the love between mother and son. Very well done!!!!!
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thanks so much! hope he likes it when he is older! imma make him my lil poet in training!
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Job well done with this sweetie. I can see you have all the wonderful love in you a mom should have. I'm very happy for you and I love the name you chose for your new bundle. Best wishes for your little family. Cathy
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This is a very well written piece. I can feel a sense of growing in this piece. Like a little baby that grows and grows... I like the flow, keep up the great work and thank you for sharing. You have a marvelous day and God bless as well
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Awww!!
I love it! It is so cute! I love the feeling you get when you hold a new baby, even if it's not yours. Great write.
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Cute poem
Well done, I especially liked the title.
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awww
this is beautiful great write i love it it makes me want a little one Lol....(someday) great piece i look forward to reading more by you
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Yes, They Grow So Quickly
and you will enjoy every minute of it. Okay maybe not every minute. LOL
Your poem is a wonderful read. The rhytmic flow, itself draws you in to the message. My teenage daughter is also expecting her first. However she is 3 years your junior.
We are all looking forward to a January birth here. So it makes for some interesting times, to say the least.
Good lck in all your endeavors and thanks for sharing this glimpse into your life.
PureCountry
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how beautiful!!!!
This was an incredible write - one I can imagine being printed and framed for nursery walls. Parents to be would certainly pay for this - I would.
I love it!!!!
Congratulations on both a brilliant poem and your new son.
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no matter hwo fast he grows or how far away he might be, a boy always loves his mommie. You;re gonna do fime, Mindie
love,
Joe
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I know all about those fingerprints, but a LONG time ago!
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Hey Mindie! This is a beautiful little poem
that you have written for your soon to be
little boy! I am sure that he love it when
he is old enough to read it. Great job my
friend and thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
Son
And we were for sure she was a girl this is beautiful my friend blessing to you and your little one always.
Edited to say boys are very sweet to Im just suprised lol
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sorry for my shadow covering the pic...hard to take a pic of a drawing i did lol
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