In my dreams, I think of
An endless field of
Fresh grass and flowers
I lay there for hours
Relaxing
Calming myself
Escaping from harsh realities
The sweet scents of
The glorious flowers
Drifts me off
To another world
Where everything's carefree
A world I long
To live in
In my dreams
I am me
Author notes
Hey Amera (:
Wishing you a very happy birthday!
Hope all your craziest dreams come true, girl! ^^
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Contest Emotions for ages 14 or over- PROMPT: calm
A contest entry
- Open Form Contest for Amera's Birthday! by PerVirtuous.
600 points, ended December 3, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What do you wish you were doing right now? by strangerforeigner.
425 points, ended March 8, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is great! I love the image of just lying on my back, watching the clouds roll by, without a care in the world.
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This is such a beautiful and peaceful poem, as I was reading I felt as though I was in the dream...
Wonderful imagery.
I love the last 2 lines especially, they are very strong and end the piece greatly...
A wonderful, strong write, thanks for entering and best of luck! =) -
This poem.. makes me feel like i've always wanted to feel.. as if only my dreams matter... I told myself someday i would live in the woods.. to get away from reality, you know what i'm sayin? to be able to sing and play my guitar and just be carefree... this poem is workin' for me..
Congratulations on your awesomeness. -
This is beautiful and full of the images of color and motion. Allan has gathered the best poets on the site to give me beauty to read on my birthday. This is of the best, thank you so much.
Love,
Amera♥
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You have expressed yourself well witin these few lines. Great imagery and emotion. Best of luck!
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good
Good imagery and write
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VERY GOOD!
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ohmy..."in my dreams, I am me..." what an incredible phrase.... wow......
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