unsophisticated and straightforward
uncomplicated and easy
undemanding and trouble-free
down-to-earth and not fussy
that’s the man whom you would call:
the guy
the chap
the bloke
parents warned and scorned...
their daughter loves me as her simple man
In a list
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND: Wanted Simple Man by Tam.
600 points, ended November 23, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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my goodness!!!
yes indeed this gentleman is certainly a simple man!
very well done!
thank you for your entry!
Blessings! Tammy
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Excellent
Truly captures a wonderful view of the simple man. Best of luck in the contest
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The title is effective as an apt introduction and as a summary of the complex simplicity within the poets voice within the poem.
Perhaps the inconsistent usage of captalization may have added misplaced focus,though presentation is personal to it's creator it is noticable that the first four lines begin with capitals and none of the following lines do.Not a criticism but an observation offered dear poet.
I don't believe this is a simple man but a man that many would like to greet and meet,if the world was full of such undemanding men then perhaps the whole world would benefit from a less demanding and less consumingly commanding attitude.
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A nice twist on this contest prompt.
so very nicely completed. Best of luck in the contest!
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