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Prejudices






difficult to believe
today, prejudices
going to satisfy,
moments we survive
in one cracks,
perfumes to evaporate youth, 
later regret
with a certain fear in heart,
going to try,
strange, stimulating,
finish in illusions.

in faces,
an expensive aura flowing,
in our sky,
a hot fog
wraps our day,
like comfort of a stay.

technologies tranformation,
thoughts, feelings, concentration
in only events.

survive prejudice,
sometimes don't see,
a great deal of times,
don't understand
without wishing to commit.




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Prompt: 6. Write about prejudice

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  • Rulebreaker
    November 28, 2007

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    This was very nice! And also so well written. I loved the lines:

    technologies tranformation,
    thoughts, feelings, concentration
    in only events.

    Good luck in the contest.