difficult to believe
today, prejudices
going to satisfy,
moments we survive
in one cracks,
perfumes to evaporate youth,
later regret
with a certain fear in heart,
going to try,
strange, stimulating,
finish in illusions.
in faces,
an expensive aura flowing,
in our sky,
a hot fog
wraps our day,
like comfort of a stay.
technologies tranformation,
thoughts, feelings, concentration
in only events.
survive prejudice,
sometimes don't see,
a great deal of times,
don't understand
without wishing to commit.
Author notes
Prompt: 6. Write about prejudice
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Comments
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This was very nice! And also so well written. I loved the lines:
technologies tranformation,
thoughts, feelings, concentration
in only events.
Good luck in the contest.

