Soft breath hovers over a passive, glassy lake,
mirrored glacier peeks through,
kissing an upside down, azure sky.
Rich, warm profusion of color stands easy,
hugging cool, still waters
content to be included in magnificent splendor.
Cool tones, warm tones,
stillness, life,
timelessness, space.
One moment in time,
stays forever,
in the mind.
Author notes
I wrote this free verse using the first photograph on the hosts contest page.
Katie
A contest entry
- Mountains and Lakes picture inspired contest by Little Eagle.
600 points, ended December 10, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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visions of nature soaring within a hearts breath of time ...keeping us in it's beauty!
I did enjoy this and Its imagery!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Thank you for your entry
A lovely poem. Such beauty of imagery in your words. The flow and structure were very nice. Thanks for sharing
Good luck in the contest
God Bless
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Thank you for your kind comments on my entry.
Katie
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Wow Katie, your words are so in my thoughts as I picture the amazing beauty that I know your eyes have truly seen,,,Excellent my dearest friend,good luck Katie with this one...Hugs of the mega variety to you...mal
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Thank you Mal, the photograph is an amazing one, excelling the true beauty of the earth. Megga hugs back to you my dear friend.
~Katie~
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I enjoyed this very much...I'm in the contest too...good luck...my mortal enemy.
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Many thanks for reading my entry, I appreciate your comments.
~Katie~
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