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" I Love You "

She sat with her legs crossed in the middle of her bed
Looking downward with tears flowing roughly
Her heart screamed for the words “I love you”
But those words escaped her from every angle

She longed to be held in his arms throughout the night
But she had to make due with a body pillow that was cold
Her spirit yelled for sanctuary within the walls of “I love you”
But the doors were closed and bolted tightly against her

She begged silently for her spirit to be whole once more
Yet the simple thoughts running through her mind broke her
Mentally and physically with the wild torture of “I love you”
But once more that simple notion never came with freedom

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  • Welcome-To-Hell
    November 22, 2007

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    Ouch this is such a painfully emotional piece all I can say is ouch, so much pain, so much emoiton, so much heart wonderfully written but definitly sad to see what someone as yourself is going through