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You And I

Yours, is my heart
Mine, is your love
Fly me to the Heavens
in the skies above.

Dance this dance
with tear-filled eyes
And share with me
Your sweet alibis.

I am the night
And you are the day
Hold me tight
I'll lead the way.

Don't be afraid
of what tomorrow may hold
Know that in you is a heart
Made up of gold.

In a list

A contest entry

please do not critique it, I like nice comments not bad.

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  • A Lonely Soul
    January 12, 2008

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    This is really nice my love, you did a really good job on this piece. i love you
    *hugs & kisses*
    your loving wife
    ~~Victoria~~


  • Stickboy
    December 3, 2007
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    awwwwwwwww Don't be afraid
    of what tomorrow may hold
    thanks for sharing a nd best of luck


  • Angelic-kiss
    December 1, 2007
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    Beautiful poem so much love very beautifully penned amazing

  • midnightblue1272
    November 24, 2007
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    Nice

    Now, this one is nice. You always seem to have the knack for writing the most romantic stuff.

  • michaeline
    November 23, 2007

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    This piece is so encouraging.Also such a love is shown in this piece like no other.This is the way things are supposed to be like and what I share with my true love.Just never been able to put it into words so beautifully.Enjoyes this piece immensly.

  • Liquid memories
    November 23, 2007

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    well done in your description of your wants and desires. all the best.


  • Tylers Baby
    November 23, 2007
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    wow i like this too


  • Todays Poem Box
    November 22, 2007
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    Wow. This was great! The flow was good, as were the rhymes.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • deleteduser
    November 22, 2007
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    This is beauty, such heartfelt beauty about loving one another. This is a nominee. Great write!!


  • azure85 gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    Yours, is my heart
    Mine, is your love
    Fly me to the Heavens
    in the skies above.

    What an enchanting beginning to a beautiful love poem. It is woven with ink spilled by a poet's love, well done my dear.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 22, 2007

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    Sigh... Once again a romantic delight.
    I love the calm breezy like flow.


    Delila


  • moonbumps silver member
    November 22, 2007
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    Swept away I am in a warm rush of romance.x


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 22, 2007

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    Beautiful work here Joel! Such wonderful
    words written from your heart my friend.
    Thanks a lot for sharing it here and keep
    up the great work!




    Jeremy0826

  • Bob Fox
    November 22, 2007

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    Swet Alibies

    Fractured romances to be. Though love is in the air. The beauty of innocence divine. Never to be crushed

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