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Spell of the Rain

For so long they have  been apart
but tonight ...
their hearts, their bodies , their souls
will be united as one
underneath  the exotic rain that is slowly
Staining their flesh

 

Their  untamed passion

 had been locked up for too long
and he tastes her lips 

 as he laid  her down the  pavement sheet
 of  desire

 

Her esscence is the air he breaths
his kisses is  her  whisperd lullubies
and as the whispering rain cast a  spell on them
they give into the night's seduction

 

The visions of his allure entices her needs
and she  cannot escape his intoxicating kiss
of ecstacy

 

He causes her  heart to burst at the seams
enveloping her  senses, as he lay her bare
on the cold  street
 because his temptation is his power over her

 

She  should not be so easily overtaken
but she is  simply intoxicated
by the ambrosia of her  erotic fantasy
and his passionate touch delivers rapture
As his whispred words
began their game of seduction

 

His simple kisses has summoned
the passionshe  have locked into the depths
of her emotions

and she  could  ONLY give in
to his soft caress when he touches her
undreneath the moonlight

Author notes

I am still trying to expand my knowledge and writing styles to diffrent themesin poetry and i have to say writing erotic poems is one of them .

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  • A-muse-in-writer
    December 31, 2008
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    Nice

    Beautiful, love the rain and am a romantic, so enjoyed it a great deal.


  • luckynsincere
    December 15, 2007
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    WOWOWOWOWIE!!!

    I loved this one... GREAT WORK!!!

    umm... should it be "their hearts their souls..." so forth... i think it should be plural.


    you have been a very busy busy ladybug This poetry has transformed.. beautifully!!

    Mel


  • azlyn gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Sensual! Lovely and deeply erotic! Very tastefully written...loved the pic and the background...they accented your words very nicely!

    Love~
    Az


  • Willie66Boy
    November 29, 2007

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    This is so sensual!! the whole scene, the connotations, the feeling of being with someone I love after so many years apart! All this is topped of by passion! Very nice!


  • Desire gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Wowzers!!

    Love Your take on the picture prompt

    Takes the reader there and can feel the raindrops on the flesh...
    the heat made me breakout the squeegee

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -throws confetti-
    Yay!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Many blessings to You Beautiful
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • Liilac Dreams
      November 26, 2007
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      when i saw the pic the fiorst thing that poped into my head was Romeo n Juliet, glad u liked it auntie

      • Desire gold member
        November 26, 2007
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        Now that You mention it...I see that too...Great observation


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 23, 2007

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    oooooooooooooooooooooolala Di, this is wondermous you are expanding and you are doing a great job of it, I'm proud of you best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 23, 2007
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    G'Day Scarlet Ambrosia

    "Her esscence is the air he breaths"
    What a line! My gooness, I am in love with that line

    This whole write is beautiful, loving, sexy and sensual !

    Thank you very much for your entry
    best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


    • Liilac Dreams
      November 23, 2007
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      Amanda,
      Thanks for your wonderful reply and I am glad you enjoyed this poem

      thanks,

      Di


  • Blueskywonder
    November 22, 2007

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    Such beautiful imagery... deeply passionate content to this romantic sensual piece of poetry

    Excellent take on the prompt


  • penman gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    Excellent

    Wow. so very powerful and arousing. Really is full of passion and deep emotions. Best of luck with the contest.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 22, 2007
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