One night I had dream
that we had just met.
You came in my door
with a gift in hand.
We sat and talked
til the wee hours
of how our lives would be.
I didn't have a clue that
you were the one for me.
We stared into each eyes
and the passion was just like
a five alarm fire.
We shared a kiss that was
so tender an sweet.
You made my soul melt
from all the heat.
That night we made love
all night just to seal
that bond.
In the morning I awakened
to see your face saying
"Baby this is real and not a dream,
last night was the first night
I made you cream".
A contest entry
- Am I F***en Loved by theredcatjazzoflove.
450 points, ended April 1, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow cream dreams right this was loaded with some jorney's for me sexy why make me rewind the millions of relationships i have had girl you bad i like this it hit home for me reading this
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Not a bad little write you have here.But if i may... the first line should have an " A " between had and dream should it not? And tenth line down should be " each OTHERS eyes " yes? but all in all a good write.
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nice way to spend an evening.
bet you felt like the cat. -
a good sensual piece of poetry, a gentle rhythm to your work here that works well, softly leading eyes down the page. a good poem.
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U know I still love this honey.
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You Made Me Cream Baby
I had to go get some tissue for this one. I really love the poem. Great work of art you are. I will never find another poet like you Absoltely not ever for you are Tha Absolute 1. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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I made you cream....
love it, keep writing girl...do you
piff
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Ooh la la... very erotic!
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