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Thoughts


Green needle contemplation
of simpler days
When startched white shirts
were Daddy's uniform
along with his banker's
smile.

Pleated remorse of a night
spent locked in
arms she thought she needed
they broke apart when the
rabbit died.

A forest of thoughts filled
with horrid images as
sharp as spoons and twice
as shiny.

Knee high alibi for a death
brought on by too much
denial.

Tails of dark deeds and deep
thoughts shunned.

Sitting in shades of regret.





Author notes

I'm unsure of where this came from my choice was # 32 here is the link to the picture that inspired the write.

http://shadoling.deviantart.com/art/Waiting-for-Trees-33445227

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  • ckwriter69
    November 25, 2007

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    hmmm interesting write from the pic. A shade of mystery and remorse. Good visuals and imagery from your words. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.


  • Shantalina
    November 23, 2007
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    wow.
    i'm stunned.
    Thanks so much for entering, i really enjoyed this piece!

  • Shantalina
    November 22, 2007
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    pic sent


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 22, 2007
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    sissie brat, wanna play?