I
want a
simple man
One down to earth
Kind, replete with mirth
who'll make my every day
with his simple joyful way
With lots of hugging and kissing
Always there never ever missing
Blessing me eternally with blissing
Author notes
Option 4.d.Simple Man.
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND: Wanted Simple Man by Tam.
600 points, ended November 23, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gimme your greenies by crazymomma.
300 points, ended August 11, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - simplicity by Avani.
1300 points, ended October 15, 2008, 26 entries
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650 points, ended August 15, 456 entries
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Comments
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this is sweet, nice take on the prompt! thanks for the entry!
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Nicely done with this piece.
Good flow, and alot said in few words.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
Oh, I have found just such a man. I enjoed the format you used for this and the descriptiveness was very nice. Thanks for entering and good luck
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DITTO!
and if you find him...please let me know if he has a brother...ummmm...make that TWO brothers? my Sis might want one also! LOL
love this take on the prompt...indeed...it can be so difficult to find a simple man!!!
love the etheree as well...so creative you are!
Blessings! Tammy
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