Stark contrasts
bliss then gloom
dark, bright
holy night
contemplation
Author notes
Quickie (10 words)
Prompt: Picture (moodswings)
In a list
A contest entry
- 10x10x20 Quickie by ZachP.
475 points, ended November 22, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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a few words hit the spot michelle,,, well deserved xx peter
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ooh what a powerful shorty you have penned here.
I love it. Well deserved shiney
Love,
Delila
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exceptional!
GREAT WORK POETESS! Congrats on the silver!
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Congratulations on the Silver. Very well done. It speaks volumnes in such few words.
Soulful Woman
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Excellent write to the prompt...spoken with poetic verve...in ten short words...succinct poetry is what you have here...not so easy to say...in so few words...congrates on silver too...deserved it is...
Mal
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"bliss then gloom"
amazing...
nicely done, good luck -
hmmmm ... why is there a holy night in there? lol - maybe it's just me ~shrug~
gotta tell you, I watched a movie called "Ichi" last night and it got me SO confused! the ending made no sense to me at all ... i sms'd Master and told Him that i'm even more confused now than i was before - lol - it's His movie
Don't know why I had to share that with you, but basically it's the same feeling of confusing with the 'holy night' deal
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Great write Good luck with it
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a very unique take on the prompt. I loved it! Best wishes in the comp my friend
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