Crushing
the lungs
Turning the
light off
Waving love
goodbye
Author notes
10 words picture prompt
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2379016
A contest entry
- 10x10x20 Quickie by ZachP.
475 points, ended November 22, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was deep did someone die if so i am so sorry
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I like this
very well composed...and expressed with emotion...a very good write for ten short words....excellent!
Mal
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love the last two lines
can definately relate
nicely done
good luck. -
i would love to crawl around in your mind in my spare time lol
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Wonderful
Very well express. Great take on the prompt.
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I thank you as well
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This is really Great Good luck with it.
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Very nice! you have compressed a lot of emotion into this writ. I enjoyed its many pages of imagery. Best wishes in the comp
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thank you!
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