Like a pendulum’s
swing.
Thoughts of you
alter,
without warning.
My Ten Word Poetry
Author notes
ten word poetry
picture inspiration:
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2379/16.jpg?1195709061
A contest entry
- 10x10x20 Quickie by ZachP.
475 points, ended November 22, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 10 word prewrites by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 15, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh you have it exactly...that stunned silence when thoughts are held in bay of bent disbelief that this coudl have happned to us. Bravo!!!
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Congratulations on the Gold. A beautifully written piece.
Soulful Woman
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Wonderful
Congratulations on your gold. it was well deserved.
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Thanks Pen...means alot...
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wow.
I think that's my critique
good luck. -
well done hun as your words shine in trueness and compassion xxxx many loving blessings always xxx
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i likewhere this took you
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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no doubt i love this piece you have written so much emotion in its shortness! good luck!!
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Thank you Searching..for dropping in and commenting...hope you leave longer comments...you can get returned points as a good gesture by the author...
Mal
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What's up with all the clock stuff this is great too.
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Thanks Poovy...next time leave longer comment...Ill return points of commenting...
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