I love you,
you're dead!
Have a nice --
shut up!
Author notes
Prompt - mood swing
A contest entry
- 10x10x20 Quickie by ZachP.
475 points, ended November 22, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh yes, mood swings. Guard your back!
Congrats on the HM
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LMAO
Sounds like me yesterday. LOL
great use of so few words.
Love
Delila
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Damn...this is good - I'm still giggling, and will use this with permission at my next stressful meeting... Frans Congratualtions on the award.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment
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I know someone just like this lol
Congratulations on your award!
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I'm sure there are a few.
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LOL ok dude....Im laughing...and honestly...you sometimes make me laugh...mostly...you amaze me...I like this thought...
Mal
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Glad you liked my version. Guess that means I can put away that knife now.
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I am defiately feeling this one.
Nicely done, and good luck -
Intense and well penned take on the prompt I enjoyed the way that you have bordered the thin line between love and .. anguish. Best wishes in the comp my friend
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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I love it you have penned the prompt well
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Excellent!! moonswing indeed
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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this is original, the last two lines will stay with me for awhile
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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