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Conflicting ... Me

Someone's bad inside me,
hurting me...

It makes me mad


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Prompt: "Moodswing"

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  • AnotherName
    November 22, 2007

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    There is depth to these few words. It seems that she has to deal with her demons. Getting mad probably makes them act even worse. Great take on the prompt. Congratulations on earning the honorable mention cup.


    April


  • penman gold member
    November 21, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Great take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest.


  • ZachP gold member
    November 21, 2007
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    simple, but relatable
    nicely done, good luck


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 21, 2007
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    Very Nice Good Luck with it


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 21, 2007

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    Wow. This is so intense. The short quick words make it a heavy hitter. Excellent. ~Pamela


  • doyouloveit
    November 21, 2007

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    different for you but i like it you have said a whole lot i think others can understand and even relate to good luck


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 21, 2007

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    i guess that would piss me off too best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

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